MagicalSarai's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Genius Test 3]

Genius test not quite genius...

I'm sorry, but one question just reeks of non-logic... much less anything to actually validate your answer: Question 13. You don't specify what kind of race it is (for one) and you seem to ignore the fact that if it is a track race... it is quite possible to lap the person in last place. The same thing with an automobile race... thus if any of the answers were correct... it would be the second answer, not "impossible!"

Also... don't know what your magic trick was attempting, but it always tried to pick number 63. So that didn't work either.

atticuslodius responds:

Sorry. I should have clarified the question to state "in a non-looping race, or a single lap race".

The magic trick is fool proof... as long as your math is correct.

[Black hole game]

A basic dodge and collect game...

Nothing impressive here... you dodge, you collect and you try to build up the energy meter to keep from dying. The coding is simple and the game is easy; if you play for very long you end up getting bored.

I would suggest putting some more time into the game... add some coding to where you get drawn in when the black hole gets near and perhaps add new and interesting objects as the game progresses. As it is right now, your game is doomed to mediocrity.

stian7 responds:

This is game is like the yellow rubber duck. Everyone has it, and you got to do something special to make it new and interesting.
This is the a typical: "Bound to happen" games. Surely there is an programmer out there that might take the credit for the first version, but if he did not do it, someone else would.
Thanks for the suggestion.

[Cancer Gun]

Not worth the time to aim

I'm not trying to be mean here... but the mechanics for your game are subpar... and the effort for graphics is dismal. Not only that, but the way it opens... I was expecting to watch a crappy flash video. After wave 2 appeared I realized I was supposed to be shooting... and by the final wave I had learned how to hit something... and the little children are immune if you don't have god's grace guiding your mouse.

I would seriously recommend retooling this game, putting some effort into learning the proper coding to make it user friendly... and then resubmitting it. Perhaps give it a storyline just for the hell of it. As of right now... Newgrounds is better off without it.

mothballs responds:

I think the world is better off without your pathetic existence